Nicely written, it rhymed well also. it seems like a storyline that has a lot of meaning still behind it. keep up the writing. "it helps"

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I liked that one one and hwo u put dancing with it and discribed life very good

Very nice! liked it

Really great poem and I loved the flow. 5/5

You use excellent detail.
& great rhymes..

But i don't get the meaning... =-\
4/5