"I nothing nice to say," < It should be " I have"
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"Pain that is all I feel. < Pain (,) that
You left me for reasons
I just don't copperhead." < doesn't make sense? .. Is it just me, or does it ? Lol.
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"But hay I'm almost over you" < Hey*
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"me like that. I am over you my
heart is just in a little shock still"
^ It would make more sense if it was something like " my heart's still in just a little shock"

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You did a great job with this poem. A few minor things, but a lot of potential, and great emotions.
GOOD JOB!!!!
<3
5/5

Aww! Fantastic! I really liked this poem. Nicely penned!

5/5 fantastic, i loved it, very relivant to how im feeling at the moment. loved it.

x

" I am over you my
heart's just still in a little shock. "
I love that line, it...just kinda speaks to me.

This poem for me was a little mixed up because of some grammer issues and everything but also it didn't like show emotion really which was dissapointing

Well i gave this a 4/5 because i personally like poems that rhyme more. but this was a great poem! i can relate to it!

This is a really good poem!...Alot like what is going on in my life..i woudl explain but i migth end up killing myself before i finish...
Great job, this truely came from teh heart
just trt o challange urself now
add the rhymes! Checkout my poems you will see rhymes and get ideas for rhymes from there!...i have been writng fro two years so im a pretty good at it!
Good luck and great job!
~shannon!~

I like the message that you are trying to get across in this poem. there are a few words that are a little off like copperhead should probaly have been comperhend but other than that I think you did well. 4/5

I thought the poem was well done. It contained some grammatical and rhythmical errors and hindered the reader's enjoyment. Also the 'copperhead' part was confusing. I'm going to assume that you meant comprehend? Anway, this poem could use some slight revision and would be absolutely brilliant if done with some slight changes to the content.

That was wonderfully written...truly over. I can think of things like this in real life.

This was very nicely written.And I can relate to the meaning.
Well done :-) x

"comperhand" < comprehend.
"shacks" < shakes.
^ Other countries and states spell things differently, I've noticed. So, if I'm wrong, mk. Lol. :/ Sorry, if so.

You did an okay job with this poem, I think you've done better. And, the flow was a bit off. But, it was a good poem, overall.

I enjoyed this poem, it kept my attention all through it, and the flow was pretty good. The poem was penned nicely though, nice work.
-Ally

Hey I really liked the ending.. it was my favorite part. Sometimes what we see and what other people see are so very different and I liked how you wrote that last line. "Im over you but my heat's just still in shock" because that is exactally what it feels like to lose someone you know that its done yet you cant stop the hurt. nice work.

I loved it, it was an awesome poem. you could really tell that you meant what you wrote, the wording was great. and it was just amazing. i added you to my faves, hope thats ok.