I enjoyed the feeling behind this poem. Any poem written with passion and emotion is worth reading. The rhythm and flow of the poem, however, was less than brilliant. It seemed jumpy and forced at times while at others the words trasitioned smoothly together. All in all 4/5.

This poem was really good. loved the show of raw emtion, and simple passion. the flow is alittle off, but it didn't damage the effect of the poem. Keep up the good work, and thanks for sharing.

I enjoyed this poem! I like it! lots of emotion running in this poem! well done! i'll give it a 5/5!

Very nice poem. Though I do not think it qualifies as a dark poem. Other then that it is a great poem and it is just fine the way it is. Another 5/5.