I love tha raw emtion you used in this poem. It was deep, dark and so sad. am so sorry that you had to go though that. You did good keep up the good work 4/5

Wow. That was a really great poem! I'm sorry you had to go through that. It was nicely penned. I could just picture the bruises and all that, It was not pretty, but you got your point well across.

Alesia

Wow. That was a really great poem! I'm sorry you had to go through that. It was nicely penned. I could just picture the bruises and all that, It was not pretty, but you got your point well across.

Alesia

This is really a very sad written poem...
but the words you use are so strong and make the poem so much better...
5/5
*isabel*