That is so sad i love babies with all my heart and to read a peom like that is just so pain ful to read i love the way u wrote it and i hope it isnt about ur life love klo mwa mwa

Omg!!! that brought a tear to my eyes i love it babies are so innocent and for something like that to happen is very sad..great job...keep up the good work..5/5
love shareeda

Avery nice poem that shows, though we don't intentionally hurt those we love, sometimes it happens. well done!

Oh!!!!...soo sad....i love babies and this peice really touched me...so painful and yet greatly expressed..
xxPoojaxx

That is incredibaly touching. i live in australia and i guess here its so safe that you begin to think something so horrible must go on these days. it takes something as beautiful as that to make you think.

many thanks for the comment!
helped me feel more comfortable :]

good luck with life.

Superb dear, so mounful feelings and well expressed. I feel glad for you cz you have written a very true and natural piece. Great 5/5

Wow, this was really touching.
love it.
keep it up

Awww ..this is so deep and has so many emotions in it..just loved and i liked the emotive words u used in there aswell:D
kep up the good work
bree

Omg
this is so well written
it made me just . lost for words
excellent
5/5

Really really good keep it up