Nitin
I am so glad you posted this...lmao...This is really funny.

I try my best to impress her family
By playing with her kids everyday
They treat me as the baby sitter
Though feelings will change someday

I love this stanza. Free baby-sitting services :)
Great job!
Love Cindy

Well done and quite funny and true...I've known a few this could apply to.

Nice constructed with a good flow and rhyme scheme....5/5 All the best, Debbie

Haha this was a good one! Made me smile!!

She is the devil's sweet angel
And she sure knows how to deal
You are just another of her victims
She doesn't give a damn how you feel

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Favorite stanza above. It really is a very good poem. Very funny too. Reminds me of the gardener of desperate housewifes, except in the end he holds all the power not her.lol.tehe. wat made u write such a thing?

Very interesting! It's a very interesting concept... I liked the way you've written it... And the end is really good! Nice work... Cheers!

Wow really cool poem! it was very interesting to read!

you have a great flow

just simply amazing!!

----tara

Lol, i loved it, excellent work, it was very creative, and i loves how you started the poem, very captivising. Good job.

Haha nice!

O my gosh u truly insane mad man but somehow i admire ur freedom of the frisky frisky talky... love laura x x x

Good job. funny lol. but for one thing im never gonna be sprung over no woman that aint mine.

WOw.. so is all this true?? SWEEEEEEET POEM by the way. You made me think of a mean angel.. SCARY.. haha..

That is very interesting, the last line really brings it together, excellent work

Wow i really really injoyed thiss great job

Thanks! haha.. You are my first voter and commenter. THANKS! haha..

Hmmm..... well, for this piece I cant be honest with you here. lol... but I'm sure you know what I would have liked to say. All I will write here is this is a great write.