I thought this poem was really good.. I know how you feel.. i can easily relate to this.. anyway good flow and keep writting!

Okay, this one was much better, I can relate to this one, the flow was awesome, the message was great. It is a true thing that people older than us think. Anyhow, getting to the next one. =) Keep up the good work. 5/5
-Ally

Wow... i love this so much... the emotion was so strong even through the simple words the strength behind your words shine... the flow is really great.. no constant rhyme or sound but still it reads really nicely... great job :D