Comments : If i were a cloud..

  • 16 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is absolutely beautiful. Such pure expressions of love and passion. The repitition of the lines 'where there's only you' and 'where there's only me' really fit the rhythmn and underscore the meaning and declaration of love. But the whole poem is just wonderful. Everything about it from the style to the language to the emotion in it make it shine.This is one of those poems that makes me say 'Man, I wish I'd written that!' This is simply lovely and is truly one of the best love poems I've ever read.

    Peace, Poetry & Power,

    Gary Jurechka