That was short but sweet liked it 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

That was awsome short but awsome

To be so short this is a very good poem, nice flow, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Excellent work, short but to the point, very good lines you used, great work, keep it up.

It was really good...i feel it has potential to be longer though!! however great job!!5/5

This has great potential to be longer excellent job

Very nice its short but works =)
read some of mine pweez mel x

Awsome!!!♥luved it

Flow's a little off , but I loved the last line...very good ending.
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