I've had this idea for a long while. I was inspired for this by "Old Man, Old Man" by U.A. Fanthorpe, whose poets I very much admire.
Feedback very much appreciated.
HxR

"He wrote about each dusk, nightly,
Candied skies, glowing entities, like...
Hope." This phrase brought me to tears. At that point in te poem, I had so many memories (good and bad) flowing throgh my head. This poems(like almost all your others) is very personal. I don't know how you do it! The writing format is very unique. you never fail to shock me.

This is a very moving poem.
extrodinary work, I dont often come across poems like these.
great job.
take care x.o.x