A real heartfelt poem. Was really good. Good eally sense the deep inner depresion as i erad this. Loved it.
Keep it up
5/5
-Black night-

Ha ... when i laugh, i cry ... u so stole that off me and crimson ... meh it was still good

This was a smooth and easy read poem. the wording was great and gave it emotion. beautiful job. 5/5.