You seem like bored about life..i understand you cos world is being more miserable day to day
But everytime there is something that keeps you carry on
I hope you look around and find that thing to hold on to life
The poem was excellent
Keep it up
Laura

Just one thing in this poem you spelt one word wrong in this im sure its just a simple mistake but in the 5th line change the word to "else" =] none the less though a nicely written poem well done here. Good flow great vocab. ~mel

You're soo talented! I love this poem! Will ou please comment on mine!?