Comments : Forever

  • 17 years ago

    by moonlil

    Wow, a beautiful poem. I like it very much.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    How vert sad. Heart wrenching poem. Excellent job on portraing your emotions.

    So please tell me, what i can do
    forever just ended, when i lost you

    This brought tears to my eyes.
    Take care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by sarah

    Wow like WOW! that last part of the poem "So please tell me, what i can do
    forever just ended, when i lost you" just killed me! it broke my heart in two. 5/5 your an amazing writter. keep up the great work!

  • 16 years ago

    by nina

    Love it! You write beautiful and meaningfull poems!