Another great poem. Heartfelt and very touching. 5/5

Touching ending... it hurts a lot :\ i like how you created a story for this. wish i could do that more often :)

Thanks for all the really positive comments

This poem meant an awful lot to me. so thank you

Holy crap i thought it was just going to be another poem to read through but this is not this deserves so much more then the credits its got, i love poems that end with a little suprise-
raindrops 5/5

ps- i am very sorry for your lost though

This poem had such an impact on me. It made me cry! I never knew anyone who was killed in a drunk driving crash but by reading this poem, it was like I was the boy missing his girl. It was so beautiful and so powerful. The emotions were radiating from the words. Amazing Job! 5/5
Keep Writing!
~Stef

Wow...this is soo good!..it made me cry!!!!...god i read it twice!.it has so much emotion to it!..i loved it.....u did a fab job on this!!!!!!!!!....wow.....
5/5
Aly

Wow this poem is amazing
i love it
it made me cry!!
so beautiful amazing!!!
5/5

Ok....first off....never give up on writing! you are truely amazing. your style is your own and i love it. second....thank you very much for the comment you left on "What is Sadness?" that was a very special poem to me. i wrote it in a time of darkness and despair. It turned out nicely if i say so myself. Third.....this poem was brilliant. In the last parts of the poem i felt that he was a ghost and was reminiscing of the old days when he was still alive. But its the girl that dies. Good effect. Nicely done. It's pittiful what a selfish breed we are. Caring only about our own fix and not caring about others lives. It's selfish. Great poem though and i hope to read more from you soon :)
Thanks alot :) :)
~*~Amber~*~