Wow, parents...you got them...right there. well done :) smilies...

work on the sing song part a bit...unless it's supposed to be like that...

keep it up

I love this.
you have a very special way of writing. its fantastic. you are so talented. i love it!
great work! 5/5

I think you are quite a talent

Fantastic. And very true. I might add my vote for you in this week's poetry contest.

Intersting, but its true parents keep wanting more form us, but its just because they want us to be the best that we can be. Great poem though.

I know how that is...my dads that way...but its a good poem hun 5/5