This poem isn't one of your absolute bests, but it could be with a little work. Try abandoning the rhyming scheme and let the thoughts flow from your mind onto your paper or computer screen, whichever method you choose. I understand the basis behind this poem because all girls are confronted with these issues/problems when they are young. You'll get through it...keep writing, I enjoy your poems!

In this work you shouted out alot of fustration but never once did you even reflect as to why your friends felt like this or the reasoning behind it all I think if you presented both sides of the coin your work would blossom. Plot121