Comments : Wanting change

  • A splending poem that is very touching..it really opens the readers to wonder what is acctually going around us,,,and outside our safe little cage we live in and the things those people in power do for the sake of power to overrule everyone else and take what rightfully owned by the deprived...
    great great poems...

  • 16 years ago

    by Iris

    I agree...great!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Alesia

    This poem really speaks! I have been thinking about all of those things these days and when I read this poem it was like everything was clear. I loved the voice in this poem. It had a really nice flow. It wasn't to bad with being emotive, either. Great job!