Comments : Outlooks and Requiems

  • 16 years ago

    by Rusheena

    Hey, love the poem. I know what you mean.

  • 16 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    I would just like to say that my very least favorite comment is "I know what you mean," because, unless you are me, you don't.

    It's not that I don't appreciate your comment and it's not that I think I'm some high and mighty writer who absorbs so much meaning and mystery into her poems that it's impossible to untangle them.

    I just know what I mean and you don't.

    Thanks for the comment, though-- I really do appreciate it.

  • 16 years ago

    by DropTheGirl

    I really <3 it. i lnow how you reel about the i know what you mean comment it can be irritating and i take them down as much as possible but sometimes they do, but only on the rare occasion. i really love this poem though great rhyming and skill
    5/5 hands down

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Wow great poem. I use writing for the same things. It is a way to release feelings, thoughts, and memories. Anyways this way truly a great poem:) I gave you a 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Yup, i really lik this i have a new poem kind of like this but this just shatters the words in mine lol. I usually only find really good poems rearly, ive found a few today your being one of them :D

    i love the way you use experimental language to articulate your ideas and thoughts.

    xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Again the word choice has left me speechless this poem is amazing. I am not sure I got your entire meaning, but the flow was great, the emtions were heartfelt, and deep, and the vocab was the best. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    Wow, i loved it, the ryhming was smooth and it didnt seem forced at all, i liked to see the way that you pulled it all together

  • 16 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    I loved it. The first stanza had to be my favorite, but the whole poem was great. I think it's a great topic, feelings most everyone can relate to, but it's still very unique. Very well written, word choice was great, as always.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    I thought it good, especially the ending talking about madness that ensues, i thought the format and pacing very well done

    your servant:
    atticus

  • 16 years ago

    by Richard Machado

    Beautiful poem, dear. It's full of lines destined to be quotes, because of it's witty rhyme and powerful meaning. Like the first line, 'I write to calm the silence,' that was classic and a funny brain teaser. This is an incredibly strong poem, no doubt. The ending pops out at me and punches me in the face, seemingly, because of how true I find it, and how simply, but magestically it was written. The rest of the poem was of the same high quality. This is an example of how to make a perfect poem.

    Truly yours,

    ~Richie