Great job
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I think the name for your poem was very creative!
5/5

That is one of my favorite songs, and you did great on making a poem from it, i give it a 5/5 as always, keep it up!!!!

I hope this one wins in the contest! This poem just blew me away. It was short, and it really worked for it. Any longer and the emotion would have been gone. Amazing work!

Hey,
great poem, I like the title and i hope this poem wins the contest.
the flow is great, keep up the good work!
kisses Stephanie

Very nice but
i didnt feel the connection I usually do reading some of your other poems and I dont know why but it was still good

I love the song to this, my favorite song...ever.

You did a pretty good job with this. honestly, I was expecting something a bit longer. But, I think it was perfect with that length. The emotions were a bit dull, I think. Though the point got across, I think you could of done a bit better.

I'm still giving you a 5/5 because it was a good poem.
keep it up, hun.
<3teria.

"I knew you 'where' the one"
"Your eyes 'where' glistening"
"Our hearts 'where' mending,"
['were']

Joe, I really loved the title of this poem, it really caught my attention. I was a bit disappointed with the 'were' mistakes, but I really did enjoy this poem. It was such a beautiful piece. I think your love poems are quite amazing. Keep it up my friend.

I liked this one it kind of reminded me of a country song where the guy is always talking about his lost love. Beautiful title, it draws the reader in and makes them wonder. The only thing I wasn't a big fan of was the last stanza.. it seemed a little off, the last two lines I think should be changed slightly.. but other than that nice work.

I loved the song to this. Anyway, this was a good piece, but I still think a stronger word choice would make it EVEN better than it already is. Just my opinion. Feel free to ignore me. =)