Wow that was good and loved the last line 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Brilliant...B.E.A. utiful....this poem seems so real to me it isn't funny. if it wasn't for my poetry i prolly would not be here right now other wise i would be on the verge of suiside..i guess it is my way to vent without anyone but me knowin..ya know
my way to cry when everyones around and my way to let go of all the forgotten feelings inside of me

but anyway

5/5...Great Job!
~love always my feelow depression poet~
~shannon~
~pumpin up the party even if i can't pump up my own bash~

Sad, but honest.
Reveals the impact poetry has on people.
I just HAVE to keep reading your work.

She's not able to run and hide
She's not able to run nor hide

for me it would be besser!
cant question ANY poem though!
what the poet writes is not to be touteched!!!

what else then 5 (2256) out of 5

What about touched instead of "touteched"??
xD
it's just because of the flow, my friend..."and" is easier to read...

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ok
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my inglish side of mi brain itst still a slip...

English, not inglish...

Ah so far this is your best poem in my opinion. it was short yet straight to the point. description and hurt was clearly evident.

5/5 David

This is definitely a short poem, but I would like to say that you should never let someone else make you feel this way. You need to rise against criticism and never hang your head low. I've noticed this same idea in a lot of your poems, and it makes my heart sad. Keep writing!

Beautiful work dear!...very beautiful and touching!...short though but it showed the emotions in a powerful manner!.
Kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

Hey,
a beautiful poem, easy to read and the flow was good, it was very touching =)
good work!
5/5
kisses stephanie

The flow wuzz amizing ur an amizing poet keep it up