Voted 4/5... honestly.. I have no words... Straight from the heart... if it is there...

You people focus too much on what means to be goth other then just being goth. Finding no reason to live or letting that reason slip and fade into darkness isn't being goth. But, for representation's sake, 4 outta 5. It still encompasses the darkness that is goth, just a little too stereotypically.

Wow, that means that I must be gothic. Your friend should write more; they're really good.

YOURE NOT GOTH! There is NO such thing as goth. Its jus a label people give other people. It isnt real. You are just you.

As for the poem, i absolutley loved it.
An i hope you take wht i say seriously an not in an offensive way.

Amazing poem...

im still trying to figure out how u come up with this stuff...

Ashleigh

Beautiful poem.....different n very well presented...Kp up de good wrk
xx Luv Pooja xx

Wow keenan. that was one of my favourite poems from you, you actually stated something so, out there. It was really good! I haven't talked to you in a while, but it seems like you still are the same amazing poetic person, great job!! I loved this one!! especially the part
"It's wrong to be happy
but I finally know
these changes I'm having
It all means, I'm Goth "

Amazing keenan!!

Alissa

Aw3som3 po3m so d33p and tru3 gr3at job 5/5 d3f!!
=======cynthia m.

This is a nice poem thanks for your comment