Wow.
You have no idea how much I can relate to this one. Sometimes all you want is for someone to save you, when you can't save yourself......
A wonderful piece of poetry, that I'm sure many as well as me can relate to.
Fantastic write! 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

I really liked this. A lot of people feel this way, especially when they shouldn't, eh.
You did a great job with this poem, once again the flow and rhyming are great. The feelings portrayed become noticed through-out it, and it's quite descriptive, I can imagine the person screaming and such.

Keep it up, hun.
<3 Teria.

This one was great, the flow was awsome and the feelings were strong throughout the whole thing. Nice wording with nice discription. Well done~Mel

Yet another master piece!!!

Note: "So every one in a while"
Is "one" supposed to be "once"?

Josie