Comments : Meet Your Master

  • 13 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem is great
    Excellent job

  • 13 years ago

    by HopefulxRomantic

    A powerful piece, of that I am sure. I don't know if there is any symbolic reference to reality in the underlay of this poem, but I can see how it would be intentional. A very solid form and relevant descriptions, I hope your writing hobby/career progresses in a manner such as this.

  • 13 years ago

    by Teria

    I really liked this poem, like a lot. It was a great poem. :D The ending.. I think it's suppose to be 'your' not you.
    I loved this poem, though. It was great! I best one I've read today, excluding the crimson door, poem.

    Keep it up, hun.

  • 13 years ago

    by Melpomene

    A power dark piece of poetry you have written here. The form was good and sold and i found it to be an interesting read. Enjoyed it alot Well done~mel

  • 13 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    This one of the BEST poems I've ever read. I'm putting this in my poems favorites! I'm speechless. I just loved the flow this poem had. Amazing! 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Black Princess

    This is awesome, loved it. flowed so well and its not something i would normally read but i just couldnt stop reading you had me hooked. Awesome work, i'm loving all your work keep it up. Very impressive.

  • 13 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    WOW!!! This is so powerful and bone-chilling. Fanominal!!!