A powerful piece, of that I am sure. I don't know if there is any symbolic reference to reality in the underlay of this poem, but I can see how it would be intentional. A very solid form and relevant descriptions, I hope your writing hobby/career progresses in a manner such as this.
I really liked this poem, like a lot. It was a great poem. :D The ending.. I think it's suppose to be 'your' not you.
I loved this poem, though. It was great! I best one I've read today, excluding the crimson door, poem.
This is awesome, loved it. flowed so well and its not something i would normally read but i just couldnt stop reading you had me hooked. Awesome work, i'm loving all your work keep it up. Very impressive.