Describe the Broken

by ashley   Apr 30, 2007


The pains felt, sharp and shocking
The tears fallen, wasted and cold
The hearts broken, undescribed, unidentified
The things that happen in this world happen for reasons unknown
The love felt between the two lost hopelessly
So many possibilities in their eyes
So many different worlds for them to live in, died
The memories linger, fogged and clouded
Soon to fade, to the debts of hatred
But that love that was there, will never end
The love felt will never die, for it was true, but hatefully smothered..so how will we describe these two broken?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    I must say this was short but amazing. the ending was strong and i think it was proof that there are still some godd pets out there.

    the scheme/rhyming was a bnit off but the raw emotion was there..

    great job.

    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 18 years ago

    by Noel

    I love this. Good work.