Comments : Sometimes

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Hey tht's a beautiful 1...loved it!...very short but well written..kp up de good wrk.
    Tk care
    ~Pooja~

  • 16 years ago

    by Diemmy

    I really like the way you phrased everything and my favorite part was the last four verses.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I can relate to what you're writing about in this one. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by katy

    This poem is really good, thanks for commenting on mine :) i can relate to it as last year was in real depression, good work :) x

  • 16 years ago

    by Stazifer Stazington

    Duuuuude
    that was e'mazing

    i loved the last part

    with the sometimes

    5/5

    that was wicked

  • 16 years ago

    by resisting reason

    Awesome work!!! i liked it alot, i can totally understand where ur coming from

  • 16 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    Wows. i kno exactly how you feel

  • 16 years ago

    by Insanity McGee

    I luv this poem it hit me hard and it made me think about my friends and wat would people do... keep up all the good poems

  • 16 years ago

    by BeLLa

    I absolutely adored this poem
    very short but sumd it all up into a fantastic poem
    5/5
    excellent

  • 16 years ago

    by Kenji

    Nice poem. I like the way you think. Ü Keep up the good work.

  • 15 years ago

    by LiNa

    Great poem i feel like that sometimes but like you said can't do it. but 5//5