Hey.. umm, just to let you know. Having inappropriate titles isn't really allowed. You can have explicit words as long as your poems are under the right category, but you should have a title like that. I recommend chancing it before the mods take action.

You also need to edit it because there is a lot of jibberish. It was a good poem, a good way to express yourself, but I'm not a huge fan of vulgar language.

I liked this poem.. it was intresting to read!.. 5/5

Wow, Its a nice expression of a sinful matter. Or at least what a lot of people call "sin". It was very provocative, and it was a small story of ones passion for another despite the circumstances. I actually liked it. WTG. Keep writing!

Ohh wow, this is excellent 5/5 dont take a feeling toward the man aboive me... he needs to calm down a bit i think... this is extrememly well written, i really enjoyed reading this.. perhaps you should read my poem " childs F**k"
~Marina~

Wow.
I don't know what to make of this poem.
At first I thought they were in love.
But you put the twist
She's only a mistress.
And almost like a prostitute with no pay.
It's kind of weird.
I think I like it.
There's no vibe saying I don't.
It's a bit strong. A lot strong.
Emotions running through.
The words you used was fantastic.
Ugh.
I don't know what else to say.
5/5 good enough?

Wow this was one of the best poems I have ever read. The word choice is perfect, the images are vivid yet clear. You did an excellent job. 5/5

Oh gawd thats sad. Getting used 24/7, id hate that. Wonderfully written [=
Carissa

Holy... yeah.

Freaking amazing. Litterally, I love it. A lot. And more.

I love the message, and the simplicity that the emotions(or lack thereof) are displayed in.

Amazing. Hehe. Wow, I'm rambling... heh heh.

OoOoO
naughty!! lol
I liked this I've never read a poem like this before
which was cool
I mean its not usual
Ienjoyed it wonderful job

Damn!!! aaaah! GREAT poem!!!!
its all just wonderfully worded...and the ending is AH-MAZING!!
although its a tad bit long...u caught me in the beggining..
it made me =[...and =]
=S
lovely lovely poem...an easy 5/5

It's good... concept was really strong... but i think we can do better without the 'f' word... at least in poetry... never mind it's my personal opinion.

Nice job
I really liked it
you have talent
i loved the vocab
and use of imagery
great job

I fcuking love this.
:)