Comments : Goodbye

  • I really love this poem..........great work and can you check out some of my poems and tell me what you think.thankz....and 5/5......

    GREAT POEM!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    A little different than what I typically read from you. I hate goodbyes even if it means moving on. What a great message you've expressed here. You really are inspiring for someone as young as you. Im still learning.

  • 16 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    So is this a hello to the New Gemma? :) i loved this poem its like you're throwing off the shackles that were holding you down and your spirit is siddenly renewed :) love it :)
    oh and btw im trying to fine something ryming with orange ;P im sure there something, i have a trick i'll try just have to find the time lol :) great poem 99/5

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey there,
    Sorry for being late once again in commenting. Will try to catch up soon.

    Really liked this one, very different but then thats what i always expect from ur poems to be. Great message in the end.

    Goodbye to all the boys I have kissed

    wow....to how many guys are u saying goodbye here...lololol

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by damon

    Loved this poem..... for real... it had alot of meaning to it....

  • 16 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    Loved the poem. Amazingly written 5/5 Keep up the good work
    Check mine out please

  • 16 years ago

    by amoxi

    Magnificant, i felt a lot of love in this poem it brought a smile to my face you really have a future in writing