This has emotion, but really should be put as a quote!! ...just my suggestion though

Its short but it doesn't change the effect it has I think it captures real emotion so well today in society theres always someone that society names an outcast and this is sad
beautiful poem!

Short and meaningful 5/5 Steve

Wow its may be short (the way i like it) lol but it was really a great poem!
great work
~Taz~

WOW that was very short yet contained a very powerful meaning with it,wonderfully written and a pleasure to read, keep it up, like your style your friend Tracy d 5/5

Wow, i really liked that, it ws short, yea, but who cares, it's a really powerful piece of writing. 5/5!

Very short and very cute.
i like it.

many x

Short but good poem..i like it...check mine

Short but Sweet
Nice job

I liked it alot! i also like your name... flirting with death. its really odd. i like it!

Short and sweet... :)
5/5
plz return the favor

When I first saw how short it was I was skeptical, but you said so much in such little words...

Complex:)

One word

superb

Short but carries a sad msg..love it

Yeh its short but its fken awsum!! good job
xoxo