It's good.
It's actually better than Loves Death.
At least it is to me.
But still...
You might want to space it out a bit.
For example
It's been forever
and I can't complain
Got only my wishes,
my secret claims to fame

Now looking into his blue eyes,
I noticed a sudden change
Then once again I remember,
Things can never be the same.

That whole thing could've been
Two stanzas.
It just doesn't overwhelm the readers as much.
Other than that?
5/5 :]

Wow!

This was much improved from 'loves dead' I loved it. With you it seems the flow comes naturally. It was filled with emotion and turned out great.

As said above, you could work on the spacing out.

Well penned.
Elainex

Beautiful, you had a great flow and beautiful wording, and the emotion was really strong and clear, i loved it. 5/5

Aww thats such a awesome poem. I know how those things feel..Well done on this one. Keep it up! Xx Chrissie

In depth and emotional,i can relate to this poem. I think that the part about him being your therapy was inspired.

Well done,written from the heart x

Good job, very full of emotion, you should show him this:).

"These load barks and broken hearts"

I assume you meant "loud"?