I loved the poem. I thought the rhyming was really good to start, it got a little shaking in the middle, but was good again by the end. Maybe try putting it into stanzas. It might be easier to read that way. I thought it was an awesome poem.

Wow, this is amazing. The rhyme sceme is hidden well, i didnt even recognize it until half way through. (That's a good thing because it is far from sounding forced). I love the backing into the topic, its one of my fave poems ive seen on this site in a while, and im not even just saying that.

{5/5}

[PygmyPuff]