Babe's story (Dirty dancing)

by robin milford   May 2, 2007


Hidden in the corner
trapped by an overprotective father
Set free by dance
and true romance

Was trapped till that summer
that they met
He brought her love,
romance and freedom

Together they could conquer the world

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  • 18 years ago

    by Debbie

    I haven't seen the movie "Dirty Dancing"; so I'll assume that it's a good film. After all, this is a nicely written work that you have in here.
    Nice shot! X)

    Debbie

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    I love this, i watched the film a long long time ago but it has stuck with me and reading this brought it all back.
    Lovely structure sweets
    5/5
    *gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    i really love the movie dirty dancing =) i like this poem, but if you could make it a little longer it would be better. i give you 4/5.
    kisses Stephanie

  • 18 years ago

    by mel

    Is dancing your life?

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