Show me

by Painted By Colors llInLovell   May 2, 2007


Show me the heart
that you have kept ever so carefully
away from the world.
Show me the chipped peices that she broke off
So i can mend it, and make you love me.
Show me the soul
that glows every so brightly
Show me the part that yearns for attention
So I can show it what love is.
Show me the scars on your wrists
that you released the pain of heartache
So i can kiss them away and show you
Show me the death
So I can show you how to live
And show me the eyes
So I can see into your should
keep you with me, ever so carefully
And I'll show you my warmth.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    This is such a good poem, but i feel that it could be batter because the way you write, it seems as though you can write more then that...it seems to me that you can write a whole novel of poetry and it would be great, dont hold back! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Oh!!..wow!!..great work...soo touching and filled with meanings.i soo loved this work...u've put in deep emotions into it..kp it up!another 5/5!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Whoa...that was very deep...short and sweet and deep...the charicteristics (for some reason, that word "charicteristics" doesnt look spelled right....) for a perfect poem! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Arun Khan

    Touched me deeply.. show me the cuts on your wrists had me nearly breaking down. really. brilliant-

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