Beautiful.....simple n well penned!
Kp it up!..Good job!

You are seriously gettin pretty truckin awsome. great rhymes.

I liked this it was sad yet it was also very happy in a way because the person in the poem knows that after they let all their emotions out now it wont happen again. I also like how short it was. I think that you should try to make the lines longer and use more metaphores and this poem could be ten times better.

Wow the flow was amazing, the emtion was clear, and the word choice was brillant. You did an excellnt job eritting this I expecially like the the second stanza. Well done 5/5

There's = there are (flow and grammatical articulation(sp?))

Only one thing's for sure, = Only one thing's for sure: (grammatical articulation)

I won't cry tomorrow = I will not cry tomorrow (adds to power of the last line)

Well written poem. Short, demanding, and powerful poem. I think you could have chosen a better title, for the title "Last Tears" isn't as powerful as a title such as "Never Will I Shed A Tear" or something like that.

Your words were simple and obvious, but the simplicity I guess is inevitable when trying to get such a short poem to flow, which the flow was virtually flawless in this poem.

Great job.
5/5
~Stephen White

I loved the flow in thi...it was flawless throught.
Though rather short, I think it hd an impact because the emotions were brutally displayed and honest.
My favourite part is the ending, it symbolised hope for me.

Loved the ending. Quite powerful. Choice of words wasnt bad. It was sad but had sort of a happy ending because of the last line. Overall it was pretty good. Nice job :]

I liked this poem. The flow was good and I really liked the word choice. I liked the format you used for this poem. It made it easyer to read. I gave it a 5/5.

First stanza?
Simple and perfect.

Second?
Gawd, you're good. :P

Til there's none.
That would sound better if you say
'Til there is none

Only one thing's for sure,
Change that.
It just doesn't flow that well..

All in all?
I loved it.
I rarely say that to poems :P
Be proud of yourself, dear.

5.5

Such a simple piece of poetry which was effective and so strong. I loved the emotions you portrayed into this piece, they were dark yet sad mixed together to for this strong poem. The flow was spot on definitly a good read.~mel

It was simple, short, yet still touched my heart, it was sad, yet you just have a way with your words. it was an amazingly written piece, nothing i can say to this would make it any better. loved it. 5/5

This is it,
The last of my sorrow.
Only one thing's for sure,
I won't cry tomorrow.

Wow this stanza is very cute and catching. Loved the structure and how you have made all the way coherent and cohesive.

Keep it up
Fsams

Great poem

ps sorry if my comments are getting shorter it is just that you gave me alot of poems to look at:~)Sam

PSS.Keep ^ the good work