Why?

by Liz   May 2, 2007


Why do you love her more?
She ripped out your heart.
Broke you down.
Tore you apart.
Then shut you out.
And showed you what false love was about.

But I...
I took you in.
Became your friend.
Then duck taped your heart,
every time
it fell apart.
I showed your heart a different rout.
&& I showed you what TRUE love was about.

-I know it doesn't quite ~FLOW~ but i tried my best-

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelly

    I like this very much very good i thik it flows very well nice job

  • 16 years ago

    by paul alexander

    Its a good one

  • 16 years ago

    by mariana

    U did good i like it

  • 16 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    I disagree with you, I think it does flow. Very true to some people so they can really relate to this. Good job on this one!

  • 16 years ago

    by jenn

    THiS Is SoOO tRuE...GooD jOb:0)

Read All Comments (6)

More Poems By Liz