Amazing poem. It was very deep with a great flow. I especially loved this stanza:

But truths is just as faint,
always heard but never seen
The truth is like world peace,
It's just a fleeting dream.

This stanza popped out to me. I find this poem very true, where ever you go, the good and bad follow. Can't really run away from 'em. Last stanza, perfect ending. Keep writing!! 5/5

That is some true stuff. and it still had a meanin to me. 5/5

I LOVE THIS POEM, ITS SO TRUE..U R SO FAR MY FAVE ON HERE GREAT JOB 5/5

Good job on your collab.

Life will always have a balance,
where there is light so is the dark.
The cycle will go round and round,
and will just begin and restart.

This stanza says so much. Great!
Take care Cindy

Hi, i would like to thank u for ur comment on my poem. i appreciate it. anyways, ur poem is wonderful. it makes you think about love and truth. great job. i'll add u to my favorites. 5/5

I love it. It's all so true. Thanx for the comment. Really great. 5/5

No words for u its juat amazing as all others have been

GOOD JOB DONE!!!!

superna

This is defintly my favorite poem by far, i like all of it except where u said all love was fake, cuz to most people it probably is,but to sum of us, it does exist but idk i can see why u said it and i like it but i dont agree with it

Holy cow! That's the best one I've read all day. Such great meaning there too!

Your peice is so deep. The truth it holds is stunning.
I think you captured this important information perfectly.

Well done,
Elaine.

P.S thanks so much for the comment on my poem :)

Good work man, like the flow it was very smooth Again Great job!!!
-5/5
Shadowe

Excellent poem. Very true - 5/5.

I love this stanza.

Love is something great,
something hard to break,
fighting for it is worth the pain.

It really something I can relate to.
awsome job!5/5

Absolutely amazing, you wrote everything I wanted to write when I wrote two of my own (one also titled Contradictions).

5/5

I absolutely LOVE this poem. i don't normally read this type of poem, but i'm looking around as i don't know where my poetry is taking me at the minute.
this was amazing, it was so well worded and just flowed. what i also liked was the actual message behind it. it was so true and you managed to right about a real life problem (for want of a better word) and still make a great poem.

well done

Wow great poem mate! Thanks for your comment also! Diana x