Damn thhis is deep i really undrstand it thats how i feel lall the time even wwhen i'm with the one i love i feel lonley and unwanted is this how u feel???
Mandie Renee

5/5

This poem really catches my eye, i like how eveyr line ends in the same line, its really meaningful to those who have ever felt this way, well mostly everybody

and thankyou for the comment on my poem hun, you're really sweet

you shouldnt stop writing either

vanessa;Ox

Very nice and deep. gets the message across.

MmH! i love this poem- very nice sad poem, the way its written ( rhym) I like it.

Hey.
thanks for the comment on my other peom. youre a good writer too. and i read the one you wanted me to. :)
keep up the good work girl.

-emily