Comments : Me An My Brotha

  • 17 years ago

    by Alesia

    I really like this poem! Although, I think the title could be changed. It just doesn't seem to fit. The flow of this poem was excellent. I must say; The rhyming wasn't to bad. There was one stanza that stood out because it didn't follow with the rest of the rhyming.

    "We breakin in now.
    Who knows what goes down.
    Except for a broken vow.
    Living amongst this town."

    Other than that. It was nicely penned. Great job, like always.