This seems a lot like a story
And less than a poem.
It also doesn't seem that realistic to me.
How would the police not care
After she told them about the rape.
That would be a crime.
Or maybe I just interpreted it wrong.
Are you talking about in her head
She told them and they didn't care?
'Cause that would make a whole lot of sense
Lol.
Sorry for being mean.
But I know you could do better.
I've read a lot of your works.
But still.
I'll give this a 4/5 :]

Very deep, a look at a traumnatized girl. excellent writing, good pacing, and a whole lot of right on.

your servant:
david

I really really liked this. You have some talent. It is sad that there are kids that act that way. The emtions were deep, clear, and strong. I liked the reptition thoughout the poem, it made the flow flawless. this was an excellent write. Keep up the good work. 5/5

It was kind of long but I liked it. Another 5/5.