Comments : In Joy and Sorrow

  • 13 years ago

    by David

    Ah this was so sad. yes some of it was of pure love and joy. well done.

    5/5 David

  • 13 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    I'm not sure I understand this..lol

  • 13 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Not saying that I don't like it.
    But I have read to of your poems so far
    And they both seemed to be stories.
    Although they are well written stories
    They are still stories.
    I re read it again.
    I have to say...
    WOW!
    This is an amazing story/poem.
    It makes you think.
    I like poems that makes one think
    5/5 deary :]

  • 13 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Nicely done...great flow and diction. I love the content and word selection as well.

  • 13 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    Amazing, it is such a sad story and i loved the way it was written, i could feel every bit of emotion that the persona was written, you write such great poems, that is the reason you are on my favs and not many are lol.
    well done

  • 13 years ago

    by Sammerz

    This was sad but i liked it it has a lot of meaning and emotion to it althought its sad i would say good job n keep writing lolz

  • 13 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Such a heartfelt poem. Started to make me cry. This is the best one that I've read. Great poem. &adding to favorites poems& 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Boy

    Well done. good written take care

  • Wow that was amazing.
    The emotion was shown and the imagery was great.
    It was beautifully penned 5/5

    [Sarah]

  • 13 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    When I read this poem I actually had goosebumps all over my body. It's such a beautifully sad poem (does that make sense?).

    5/5

    Josie