Ah this was so sad. yes some of it was of pure love and joy. well done.

5/5 David

I'm not sure I understand this..lol

Not saying that I don't like it.
But I have read to of your poems so far
And they both seemed to be stories.
Although they are well written stories
They are still stories.
I re read it again.
I have to say...
WOW!
This is an amazing story/poem.
It makes you think.
I like poems that makes one think
5/5 deary :]

Nicely done...great flow and diction. I love the content and word selection as well.

Amazing, it is such a sad story and i loved the way it was written, i could feel every bit of emotion that the persona was written, you write such great poems, that is the reason you are on my favs and not many are lol.
well done

This was sad but i liked it it has a lot of meaning and emotion to it althought its sad i would say good job n keep writing lolz

Such a heartfelt poem. Started to make me cry. This is the best one that I've read. Great poem. &adding to favorites poems& 5/5

Well done. good written take care

Wow that was amazing.
The emotion was shown and the imagery was great.
It was beautifully penned 5/5

[Sarah]

When I read this poem I actually had goosebumps all over my body. It's such a beautifully sad poem (does that make sense?).

5/5

Josie