That poem kinda brings me back to my childhood....wow... keep writing.... check out my poems too...

Nice poem. Very sad poem.
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her only family is vile
yet when nothing is going right,
all she can do is smile

5/5. Good work.

Ray Blue

This poem is amazing =]]
there are so many kids living this life.
its realli sad. anyhoo keep writing cause you are an excellent author!