Wow, this is actually a very well written poem. its so very strong and deep. so much pain is expressed, you have done a good job and should be proud. keep it up xxxxxx

Beautifully written poem...deep, sad and dark...
i have a suggestion, though...(no criticism...=) ) if you divide your poems into more stanzas, it would be easier to read...not that it isn't amazing that way...but the most "distracted" readers might lose the interest...
anyway, it's a wonderful poem...
keep going
*isabel*

This is so deep, its really good

xx

5/5 from me :)