Comments : Welcome to my world

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow, this is actually a very well written poem. its so very strong and deep. so much pain is expressed, you have done a good job and should be proud. keep it up xxxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by isabel

    Beautifully written poem...deep, sad and dark...
    i have a suggestion, though...(no criticism...=) ) if you divide your poems into more stanzas, it would be easier to read...not that it isn't amazing that way...but the most "distracted" readers might lose the interest...
    anyway, it's a wonderful poem...
    keep going
    *isabel*

  • 16 years ago

    by lish

    This is so deep, its really good

    xx

    5/5 from me :)