Awesome. Again I can feel the pain seeping out of this. The flow was excellent, and the word choice surperb. Keep up the excellent work. 5/5

I like the perspective it was written in. its a very interesting poem, and i can really relate to it right this second. great write. 5/5

Ohhh I LOVE this!
The opening dragged me in, and from there on it kept getting better and better. The last stanza, I found to be very intense and a perfect way to wrap up.
The only suggestion I have for this is try to use less fillers, I kept seeing them in a lot of places.
However, apart from that, I think you did a wonderful job with this!

Good stuff. Very good imagery. It's better to let him go than to lead him on, though.

I love the way that it sort of tells a story and your feelings at the same time, and your emotions were very clear. sometimes it just makes a poem a whole lot better if you use better adjectives and verbs and such. it helps to pin point the emotions you are describing. but over all it was great. keep up the good work