Im the 1 one to coment!
uau!
let me enjoy the moment
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feels nice...

anyway, why do ya always talk on suicide, dont be sellfish (?) there is also HOMICYDE!!!

For someone who has only recently started writing poems in english your poems are well structured, imaginative and full of emotion

Cant get better than that
Elise

Really really well written, i like your style, and the emtion once again shines though, powerful, and the word choice perfect. again well done on such a dark poem 5/5