This One Has Alot Of Meanin Behind It...

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it's very meaning full which I like

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its truthful.
ii like this poem
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This is true. people do need to learn to look past all of this. but so many people are so arrogent, that it seems as though it will never happen.
on the first line though, i think you should add quotation marks around the word "terrorism" it adds effect, and shows what word/thing you think people need to look past.
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We need to look past the colours
Past black and white
Past rich and poor
These are not reasons to fight

dear, i do think you misspelled pass. It's...not past..^^"...
This is true, and I support what you say that we must stop sterotyping others for their beliefs and color and position. But the last stanza seems rather off somehow. Great work, and nice freestyle!

I agree with you

and this poem is so heart-felt
and it's so true!

And what the hell is it for
People killing in the "name of god" <--this is what is crazy about the world.

it is written with such strong emotion that i'm sure this poemwill make even a indefferent reader care.

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You make a good point in this poem. The truth of the matter is we are all humans. There is always some other person wanting to be superior. The only way it can end is the extermination of the human species.

Sadly, this is true because it is in our human nature, to be superior. Whether in money, religious matters, or in poetry. There is no denying it, it is our human nature.

This poem really saddens me because it opened my eyes for a while the horrible life this Earth has become. The horror of saying I will kill you in the "name of God". This old testament action without the slightest compassion of mercy. We have come to a world of violence, anger, and war.

We can not do anything about it, but put the bad guys away for life.

Oh those people in those towers... I feel like leaving a river of diamonds from my eyes. Because they just went to work like every other day. To imagine, what if today... is our last day?

It opened my eyes... because... it brought me to the thought, a cruel thought, what if... today... is my last day? My last hour? My last minute to live, to breathe... to say I love you to the person I love...

Really sad.

_[Deathly'Amore]

I was wondering where the title would fit in for a while but it all made sense in the end =) I saw that movie too and I can completely understand why it inspired you to write this. I like the way this is kind of pensieve and then ends with an angry outburst. Very effective.

Em xXx

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS POEM.....

its so true.. every line in it is true....

it really bugs me when people cant see past the color of someones skin or they dislike someone because they have a different religon.... and it really saddened me when everything happened on september 11th .. this world that we live in is full of violence and alot of people have anger issues.. sometimes i think we all wish it would just disappear and that everything would be just peachy.. but of course that will never happen...but im glad someone took the time to actually think about it and write something unique... this poem really touched me...

wonderful job.5/5

This was a very excellent poem! I can completely agree with you on a lot of these issues. However, there was one grammatical error that you made that really bothered me, you did not capitalize God. Some people may take offense to it, so that would be my only suggestion, for you on this poem. Otherwise, I absolutely loved it!

P.S. This poem does make me think of my "Is This America" poem. Great minds think alike!