Very good, I can see that you love music and wish to be good at it. An excellent job, keep it up.

Loved this poem alot david. I really understand your dream to be this your portrayed it so well throughout the whole poem. Flowed nicely well done~mel

Hey,
i can see that you love music a lot, its a nice poem and it flowed nicely, I enjoyed reading it, you definitely deserve a 5/5
kisses Stephanie

Daviddd!!

I love this poem. I think it's one of your best, I've read them but haven't commented. Sorry. =[ But yeah I really like the picture this showed. You're getting bettererer at this. Lol.

Love youu and Miss you!! Ttysoon?

` Glenduh =]

Great poem well written

Wow very nicely written. i loved it. take care

Wow. that was amazing. again you continue to amaze me. thanx for commenting on my "at the age of sixteen poem". i do appreciate it. i wrote it because first off, it's a true story, and girls all over the world should know who they are giving everything up to. well thanx!

This was a great way that you have expressed your feelings about music
throuch this i can see that you have a passion for music

I love this one I knew u were passionate about music now I can feel that passion tho this poem