Comments : Come on, Try It

  • 16 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    This poem is well worded and has a beautiful concept... your flow could be better... but i did enjoy reading it

  • 16 years ago

    by I will love you Forever and not a day less

    I really love this poem..........great work and can you check out some of my poems and tell me what you think.thankz....and 5/5......

    GREAT POEM!!!!!!!!!!!