Really good poem, I enjoyed reading it.

OMGosh!
this is an awesome poem! i
I really LIKED It
Especially when u said
"instead i wound up in the arms of my destroyer.
he caressed me and said everything would be fine
and he would lead me to the light.
he lied right up until he stole my heart and
then left me bleeding there in the path.
i died inside that night."
thats my favorite part!
really loved it!
keep writing!

OMGosh!
this is an awesome poem! i
I really LIKED It
Especially when u said
"instead i wound up in the arms of my destroyer.
he caressed me and said everything would be fine
and he would lead me to the light.
he lied right up until he stole my heart and
then left me bleeding there in the path.
i died inside that night."
thats my favorite part!
really loved it!
keep writing!