Comments : You told me...

  • 16 years ago

    by SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG

    Deep and sad. It had lots of sadness behind it. I think the poem was a little slow to start but it got better as it went along. I like how you told how the person hurt you in the last stanza. It was a good poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by ThatPerson

    ...And you say that your poems suck,shame...LOL,but 4 realz they are good.

  • 16 years ago

    by DanixDelinquency

    Sorry about the odd symbols instead of grammar.

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    I like this poem. It is very sad.