Comments : Cost of freedom

  • 16 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    "or is she too far dead?"

    the final line just summed up the feeling of the whole poem. fantastic job at writing about such a horrific topic. 5 x

  • 16 years ago

    by Woe

    I dont know if this is from experience or just a poem but its really really good. sometimes we sell ourselves for more than just money. i used to let people use me just so they would pretend to love me for a day or two, pathetic huh, but true. and this is heartbreaking because i see what i've become... <3