Comments : Dream

  • 12 years ago

    by June

    Seeming to find such joy ,
    in a simple childish ploy.

    This was a beautiful poem ,and the above words are somewhat true as when you see things throught the eye of a child life does seem so much more simple.Very well done ,you keep writing and I'll keep reading.take care.

  • 12 years ago

    by Miu

    Very beautiful poem. Makes warm inside and it must had been a very special moment for you. Keep up the great work :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Deana

    A very touching memory,our time with our kids goes too fast, excellent write.

  • 12 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    I love short poems that say so much cy

  • 12 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    "Seeming to find such joy ,
    in a simple childish ploy"
    Beautifully penned!....short but filled with meaning..very sweet writ!..kp up the good work!
    xxPoojaxx